by Jay Colon Mar 7, 2013
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I feel alive when you're around. You're the best. I can't resist you. I am absolutely crazy for you. This love is rare. The beauty of our romance. It's long distance. It can last a lifetime. I didn't think I'll find another. Or love again but you are my sweetheart. You are unbelievably beautiful. I love you more than words. I hope to never see you go away. You are my significant other. It doesn't matter if you're in a different city or state. 10, 20, or 1000's miles away. My love for you is as love should be. Love has no distance. |
by Jack
Nicly Done! |
by Jay Colon
Thanks you! |
by Ben Pickard
"Love has no distance" - exactly right; I love this line. The poem could do with flowing a little more freely (less full stops) in my opinion, but the content is honest and moving - as any good piece should be. Well done. |
by Jay Colon
Thank you |