Love Is A Flower

by KaJean   Mar 7, 2013


Love is a flower, 'ever growing on
My love shall continue until the last petal is gone.
I am the flower, you are the sun.
My roots depend on you to carry on.
With your rays and beams shining on me,
My leaves and stems dance before thee.
Growing, and growing, until one fall
I lost one petal...and then lost all

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  • 11 years ago

    by KaJean

    Awe! Thank you so much! I really didn't expect this kind of feedback from anybody, so this really means a lot to me coming from all of you :) I will definately start posting more up soon!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love the flow...it was mega smooth and really pretty...I loved the fact that it seemed cliche but like Tony said, when you actually read into it, and look at the different meanings, its actually really deep and powerful.
    How empty we feel without the love around ourselves.

    Love this. x

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My goodness, this poem is AMAZING! I love the emotion and the simplicity of your word choice. The voice is clear and it portrays the piece so well. Excellent write, I love it. The descriptions are great and the flavor of the piece is nice. I really really enjoyed it. I agree, for a first here, its wonderful.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    For your first poem on the site I'm impressed

    To be honest I didn't think I was gonna like it
    Because to me it sounded a bit cliche, but when
    I read deeper into it, I loved it , simple but yet
    Not so simple , it spoke to me , and by the end
    It had me wanting more.

    Awesome piece :)

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