For your first poem on the site I'm impressed

To be honest I didn't think I was gonna like it
Because to me it sounded a bit cliche, but when
I read deeper into it, I loved it , simple but yet
Not so simple , it spoke to me , and by the end
It had me wanting more.

Awesome piece :)

My goodness, this poem is AMAZING! I love the emotion and the simplicity of your word choice. The voice is clear and it portrays the piece so well. Excellent write, I love it. The descriptions are great and the flavor of the piece is nice. I really really enjoyed it. I agree, for a first here, its wonderful.

I love the flow...it was mega smooth and really pretty...I loved the fact that it seemed cliche but like Tony said, when you actually read into it, and look at the different meanings, its actually really deep and powerful.
How empty we feel without the love around ourselves.

Love this. x

Awe! Thank you so much! I really didn't expect this kind of feedback from anybody, so this really means a lot to me coming from all of you :) I will definately start posting more up soon!