by Biancas Veil
I like the start of this it is great hope you get to finish it off |
by Gabriel
Well here it is I guess after I took a break the first time I wasn't sure how I wanted it so I didn't get around to finishing it for a while. Hope you enjoy though it has taken a bit of a turn from what I first thought it would be like. |
by Kips2.0
Wow! This is pretty intense, ugly and very sad. I hope things go well for you. :) |
by Gabriel
Ya after looking at most of your poems I didn't think this was your type of poem, most of yours are bright and uplifting, that's why I didn't ask for the reciprocate, but thanks for the vote anyways. |
Oh my!!! i'm blown away by this poem! :( i'm sorry if it's true since most of mine are it's stories of my life and my favorite part of this great poem would have to be |
by Gabriel
Oh no this doesn't relate to me, I notice that my life is actually quite simple compared to a lot of others on this site, I got it easy, but I like writing sad, depressing, or dark stories, so thanks! |
WOW, THIS IS TRULY AMAZING, I LOVE THIS POEM, IT REALLY SPOKE TO THE SCARS AND GASHES ON MY HEART 100/100 |
by Gabriel
Thank you! |
by WintersAngel
I really like the flow. My attention was front and center the whole time. My heart actually started racing toward the end! Great poem. |