Proudly woman

It's not easy been a woman yet at the same time we have to be proud for the abilities and tasks we accomplish! I liked this write.

The measure of my existance
None can imagine
Am the shadow in every being
The reason of life existance
For it all starts with me

^^A nice introduction for a woman. Women are like a shadow and the very life begins with them too...the giver, the nurturer. Just one thing the word existance, a little typo existence.

A creature with abilities, am
With a heart that cares
Sacrificial at every point
Capable of protecting
Selflessly i bear all battles
Even when am no worrier

^^This stanza clearly shows the strength of a woman at very stage of her life. She may not be cut out for this job but she does it and excels in it for each stage is a battle. Liked this stanza. The last line did you mean 'warrior'?

Yet, sad is my destiny
Defined only as i live it
Nothing is certain
For my path lays in another's
Wo-man am called
A lover, wife and mother.

^^An interesting ending and I like how you have separated the word woman because that too shows there is a masculine force even within our label wo-man! This ending makes me feel the down part of it all. Even though we do and accomplish we are still under the thumb of a man! I can really feel the sighs of the writer here..a good read :)