Monumental

Jenni,
I could feel this, its very relate-able for me and I think that is why I was drawn to it from the opening line,
You took something you had read and made it your own, which turned out to be magnificent.

I love how the lines were short, and this made it feel more desperate, like there was a part of you that wanted to drag it out, you wanted it to be felt and it was.

A really well penned piece that's going into my favourites :)
x

:$ they are only two words to put my name up there :$ :p

but anyway... I'm really fond of how you linked the title, which says a lot, with your content. original!

the image of 'china' was a great addition; it emphasizes a lot this pain of cutting.

"It's become
her own form
of art"

^ that was my favorite part!!

I do favor the second half....
Great write, Jenni!