Comments : Naivete

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Sara, I love this....the emotion is just inevitably cast to give me goosebumps and feel a little melancholic, without distracting the greatness of each line,

    I want to pick out a part that I loved, but I love it all, it's totally crafted so well...almost flawlessly flow throughout...

    You're awesome :) x

    • 11 years ago

      by PinkyPrincess

      Awww thanks Tara!! Glad you liked it!! I wrote this poem for the 7 Day Contest by Colm... so I'm glad it turned out well since most of my contest poems aren't so good!

      You're more awesome :*

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    I love this poem. your words are very heart felt and your emotions are amazing. Just remember that time heals everything. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    The melancholic tone just captivated me. I love this piece Sara <333