Purpose of Creating Hands [Tanka]

Gud one khalid.

Nice tanka Khalid...please count syllables in line 4 I count 8...but nice message as well.

Hmm, really gets the reader thinking about the sins and obedient things they have done. I actually looked at my hands after this.
First thing to pop into my head for obedience was a man working, a person holding a child, someone off at war
Sins: someone off at war.. Doing as told yet taking lives.

I love it

Beautiful and well said, but so are all of your tankas ;)

Great tanka Khalid and a clever subject, we can not only do so much, we can say so much with our hands. I think you make this point very well.