by Darren
Great tanka Khalid and a clever subject, we can not only do so much, we can say so much with our hands. I think you make this point very well. |
by Rusheena
Beautiful and well said, but so are all of your tankas ;) |
by Kate
Hmm, really gets the reader thinking about the sins and obedient things they have done. I actually looked at my hands after this. |
by Lostlove1
Nice tanka Khalid...please count syllables in line 4 I count 8...but nice message as well. |
by average thoughts
Gud one khalid. |