Comments : Blue (Acrostic)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    DANG!!! This is fantastic. I love how effortless acrostics feel yet how difficult they actually are. I love how descriptive you were with this piece and how you managed to make something so short so vivid. Love it.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      This was my first acrostic, so I'm glad you liked it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Now I gotta look up Dubai, I Love poems that educate and school me, and that are based in something real, not just flowery nonsense.....

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Haha, I'm with ya. Thanks, Andrew :)

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Dubai, one of my most fav place, and d rsn is dat it is entertaining..i lv dubai..and uor poem too.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, excellent first acrostic Rusheena!

    Your choice of country was well portrayed and your wording was flowing smooth and not forced. Your colour did refelct your city well.

    Well done on this one, very peaceful poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Lovely rusheena.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved this piece Rusheena, really simple and I liked this.
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    I just looked up the city. Very interesting choice! How to you come to choose it?

    I first heard of this country in the news 12 years ago ....

    I think its one of the most prosperous places on Earth.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      It's definitely one of the most prosperous in that region, and the economy is still growing. I covered it a bit in my world geography class last month, and I revisited it, when I saw it featured in a travel channel special. Plus, I was trying to decide between Dubai and Morocco, and I ended up choosing it because Dubai had more blue scenery.