Comments : Here I am!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Just calm down ok? Take a deep breath, close your eyes and clear your mind. Focus on nothing, think of nothing. Just relax.

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Understandable. Its hard ....when u feel like your hole life's a lie ....but know people love u....and stand behind u through it all.....

  • 11 years ago

    by Gone Forever

    Calm down now!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    KELWIN, I'll help, tell me how and I'll help anyway that I can, please don't give up on life, you're so strong and I know you can get through anything and I am always here for you! This poem was written with a lot of force and power and you talent ahs been made clear once again with your great express, good job with this poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I can relate to most of this. You really have a ton of the emotion and thought here. I'm glad it ended up here instead of hurting yourself more though (at least I hope this is the case)

    well written