Singing rose (triple lanturne)

This is beautiful, I like the imagery of spring time setting in and the seasons changing, I think it expresses in a way what it feels and means to you as well.

Red
Colors
Revealing
Secrets of the
Heart

Love that stanza, it's really vivid and magical. You always just know how to paint a picture for the reader within their mind. One of the greatest poets I have ever come into contact with, keep writing.

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Great job with the syllable count (I always find that so challenging) and yet getting your story ot beautifully. Excellent choice of style, these kind of pieces are not often found here on poems and quotes. I really like it.

Great piece.

Wow! amazing written.

This was really impressive, I had also never heard of this and I think it looks very attractive for a poem but also you done a good job creating it.

Nice work

Weird how I've never come across this form ,

I thought you did a wonderful job with the short structure , really beautiful poem