Comments : You Undeniably Messed Me Up

  • 11 years ago

    by whoami

    This makes me sad

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Oh wow. Just wow. Sis this poem brought tears to my eyes. God pure perfect. I completly love it. 100000000000000+/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Hun, I know how much he hurt you and the fact that I encouraged you kills me to think about now that I look at this. But the feeling you have right now, in time, will fade.
    The light and love that you have lost will return and it will be twice as beautiful as whatever you may have felt for him.
    But for now don't dwell on the past and pray. Bask in God's love for you. Right now that is all you need.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    But to throw a true love away
    Then turn and promise another
    "I'll always stay"
    After leaving with no explanation
    Okay I get it
    You never meant it
    ^^I truely connected with this lines.
    and I am in doubt in this word
    The more I'm unravaling at the steams!
    ^The word unravaling should be unraveling I think.

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I hate liars. especially when they intentionally hurt you . but karma will get them back. i like how you worded everything . you put your feelings into it. so it makes it special.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Because this pain is a heartache
    Meant for no one to bear

    I think getting a broken heart is a right of passage in life. . . . you go through it and it makes you stronger. but yes, heartache is undeniably the worst. and I feel the pain within this entire poem. let your heart heal. Eventually it will.

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Another long poem Cathy, but sooooooo worth the read! Really enjoyed reading this!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Victoria

    Verrrrry detailed. Ithink so many can relate. Love this!