Comments : Promises

  • 11 years ago

    by SC Club Account

    "Its a truth not a lie built on yammering words with no direction."

    You should add an apostrophe in 'its' because I think you meant to say "it is" rather than "its". Other then that, I liked the flow of this.

    ~ Mark

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon

    I found it strange that as soon as I started reading this poem a song called No Promises came on shuffle on my iTunes xD. I really like the message in this- I think people take promises much too lightly. For this reason I love the line "For it is your signature that signs the promise". A promise is a commitment. Something to show that you really mean what you're saying. I also love "it is only as strong
    as the person who makes it". I really liked this, good job :)