Comments : A moment from reality

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Lillie,
    This poem was beautiful and sad.
    My favourite poems are love poems and this is lovely to read.
    Thanks for sharing your words.
    I loved the lines :

    'Your perfect porcelain skin, touches upon mine.
    We were friends, but our heart have crossed that line.'

    So glad you are in our Club!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This rhymed really well, Olga.

    The setting is one I love: the beach. I live so nearby, just a 10 minute drive:)

    Your prince will come, I have no doubts about that!

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely Rhymed, Good Work!!!