Comments : Woe

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Think positive and love every minute with James,
    this touched me, this made me tear up,
    Oh, I love you Andrea, this write was precious, but oh so beautiful too.

    The sadness is evident, the hope is strong, and the beauty is breathtaking.

    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wonderful poem, I really enjoyed reading it, it has a way of speakng to the soul

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This feels like such a triumphant piece. Love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ouch. The fact that I love you so much pains me to read such poems from you....

    I thought that second stanza was so beautiful, but crushing for those of us who know your story...because 1. the use of "I welcome", is just your sweet kind spirit shining, and the fact that its almost sarcastic shows of your frustration with your situation of darkness.....

    I really think this poem is just gorgeous to be honest....its sad, but very breath taking.