This poem really made he feel at peace inside saffie. I personally love well written nature poems as you can use so many things in it. You start out simple with the field but it says a lot. The grass is fresh and I can see the sun reflecting off the smiling faces. Flowera really are vibrant and beautiful. I love the imagery you bring with the flowers here. There are many ways you think about flowers. The horizon holds the sun shine and it brings a lot here. It means it is.a beautiful day and the sun is happy. Thats how I think at least. The clouds seem to protect the sun from harm and that means thesky is bright blue and that again means its a bbeautiful day. The sunflowers are the best line I feel because they hold the great imagery in my mind. They reach the peak of the sky so they are as tall as the tallest person. It really is tranquility. There is so much peace. I can feel the free spirit love here. I can see people smiling and the warmth here as you go through the day. 5/5