Critique:There's some punctuation errors throughout this. Don't* That's*, just that kinda thing. Maybe run it through a checker. :)

Interestingly enough, I click on this because of its category, because I very seldom see slang poems that I'm compelled to even read.

This was a very freeing piece, like you don't give a damn what anyone says about your poetry, it's yours - you own it.

And that's what I like about this.
Good write!

I can totally relate to this great poem :)