Love your writing style Kips!
So imaginative!
You have an interesting way with words. More!

This girl really got to you, I can tell.

Eventually all pain subsides and you will be ready to welcome a new flower in your garden and be a wiser garderer at that.

Well worded emotions,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: my latest one in return, please!

Kips.... You poured your heart out here. I love your rhyming.

Keep penning:)

Stay strong^^

This is amazing. Interesting style! It's almost like a song but you really portrayed your heartache. Brilliant write.

Danika.

5/5