I can't believe you have written 176 poems and had no comments......

So I thought I would take a look at a selection.

Only thing is Raymond, they all appear to be virtually the same!!

You get the point over very well about your feelings, there is definately a love vibe going on, but sorry for me this poems flow is broken by a repitition that doesn't work in this case. I also feel it could do with a minor polish with the layout and trim some of the words back.
However negatives aside, the final stanza in this was really poetic and the imagery fitted your subject matter very well.

Hello thank but it's not about me it's about the women who's heart is empty and would like to be love and feel love.

i have been writing these when i was 8yro and went to five diff schools in new york city and one here

Hello thank but it's not about me it's about the women who's heart is empty and would like to be love and feel love.

i have been writing these when i was 8yro and went to five diff schools in new york city and one here