I really think this is a good poem to read aloud, I did so, and I guess it's because of your almost persistent voice in the beginning. The truth here is so blatant and bare, like there was no definite resolution, this person picked up his bags and said a goodbye without hesitation. I like how you give clues as to who this person was, a close friend who maybe was different from other ones you had, gave a unique refreshing perspective. Elaborate more possibly on the "made us realize".... |
I feel like this is a situation that you truly have to experience yourself to believe it. I can only imagine the emotions you're put through when someone you're close to just leaves. You question their love for you, if they loved you why would they leave. So with that you resort to old habits, wishing they come back and see how much it hurts. You're right, despite our faults someone should still love us. |