Comments : Repeat

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    People truly are confusing most of the time and sometimes it's even hard to figure ourselves out. I think this is a very sweet poem. And here is what I think. When you think about a person you discover more than you from before. Yet sometimes it really is still confusing. We don't truly know who the person is inside. I like what you say though. I like how you seem admit although you know this person, you discover something new everyday. We do fight ourselves everyday and it is hard to know what is wrong and right. Knowing the difference helps us grow I believe. I think we all have to follow our own path in life and we can overcome a lot if we tried. Which I believe is what you are saying.

    It's hard to follow the heart because love is a hard pathto follow. You want to be with them but on the other hand you want to be alone. IIt's hard when you hurt inside. If we overthink things it does make us crazy and we as humans do that more than we admit. I love how you said your heart hurts. One person can change our life for the good and bad. I love the last lineas it shows you let this pperson control your emotions. That is the worst feeling in the world. The mind does go into madness. I love the title it fits so well into the deeper meaning of the poem. Everything you decribed here is a vicious circle of repeat. You can change but it's very difficult. Great poem though. 5/5