by Baby Rainbow Mar 17, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Your convincing tears were naively believed |
Saffie this is incredible and very heartfelt... I could practically feel your heartbreak through each line that was written...hugs can be so deceitful and warming. Very well written |
by Maple Tree
A hug of deception is a painful stab to the heart... when one betrays the other with false hopes .. the heart tends to blame themselves... this poem cries with emotion but I know it soothes the soul to write.. powerful piece Saffie |