Comments : Betrayed By A Heartless Hug

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    A hug of deception is a painful stab to the heart... when one betrays the other with false hopes .. the heart tends to blame themselves... this poem cries with emotion but I know it soothes the soul to write.. powerful piece Saffie

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Saffie this is incredible and very heartfelt... I could practically feel your heartbreak through each line that was written...hugs can be so deceitful and warming. Very well written