Time is a vital element in our lives and not only does it tell us the time but also dictates our lives, one way or the other!

I like this poem and the reader can hear the writer think aloud..enjoyed it. One thing though,
this line:

Like the air we breath, it will aways be apart

Did you mean a part= it belongs to something a part of life. Whereas apart=separation. I maybe wrong but I felt that the line "like the air we breathe, it will always (by the way missing L in always) be one-a part of us.

Hope I did not confuse you...take care :)