I have to take my hat off to you....this seems very, very complicated and yet you have pulled it off so eloquently! I remember you used to do a lot of formed poetry and I always enjoyed reading them...glad to see you posting again.

Very nice job. I enjoyed the read.

This form sounds very difficult yet you have penned it so very beautifully and effectively! Very well done my dear and it's so good to read a poem from you after a long time :) Keep penning!

Very nice work with the form and the poem. A nice way to return to PR. Brings to mind feelings and emotions of being dragged down into an abyss and trying to escape, asking why it happened.

Sorry was double post.

This is a very well constructed poem, and its message is one that should be heeded. It reminds me of the picture that Foster Gamble presented in Thrive.

Amazing

I just knew this was a winner when I nominated it.....well done..very deserving!

This is amazing. It flowed so well. I definitely would love to read more. Well done!

What a difficult form, this was written exceptionally well. Without the fact it is written to a form that is very challenging it also contains some great images.
Love the 'voices chained in Golden towers' and 'don't hide in coward camouflage'
I have read this 4 times now and each time I am really impressed by the professionalism of this piece. Every word is a perfect choice, the flow is amazing. I love the topic, and the form fits this topic well. I wish I could say more as a judge but I think this poem says so much for itself. Easy 10.

(Weekly Contest Comment - 3/25/13)

I completely appreciate the fact that the author posted information about the form of this write, it sounded very confusing to me, so I must applaud the author for being able to create such a wonderful piece using this form. The title captures ones attention and holds it throughout the write, the word choices remind me of olden days in England... this is an incredible write from beginning to end. (10)