Comments : Dear . Diary <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This was endearing, Olga.

    I hope you and he will be happy. Remember the advice I gave you in the club about this.

    Our love it may be distant, our love it may be new.
    But our love is something special, and over night it has grew.
    ^^
    has grew is incorrect grammar. Maybe you could replace it by " and overnight it grew"

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Very, Nice!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rebecca Bentley

    Omg! I love this!! It's brilliant babe, and a great write :) I hope it works out for you