I definitely felt euphoric after reading this! I loved each and every line, I mean from the "paper storm" to "raspberry hideaways" to the "emerald" and "eternal rosy moon"... I felt wrapped up in this imagery! What a filling write with such vivid words that paint a whole scene of peace and passion. I also liked how you spoke of the sunset so gingerly calming you & lounging within your soul. It makes me wish I took photographs of the sunsets every day, but sometimes I do go outside and it's amazing how you can just stop and stare at it. Beautiful! :] |
by Tara Kay
This was such a melodic write here, and the tone was just gorgeous throughout...the imagery was fantastic, creating a scene in my mind that made me smile. |
by Marcy Lewis
Holy imagery explosion. |
by Rusheena
Oh my stars! Andrea, this is perfect! I'm so glad that this was the first poem I read today because because it really does make you feel euphoric when you're reading it. |
by Wild Flower
Your tone here shows your mood when you were writing it. The words choice and imagery are so great, it appeals to anyone who reads it. |
by Lonely Rider
What a fabulous imagery ... from beginning to the end, not one line failed to amaze me. Such marvellous creativity. |
by Meme
The title sounds like a name of a perfume and considering this is a nature's poem I found that to be a very smart choice. |