by Britt
Only you could take the prompt and write it into something like this. I love the first two lines.. so creative as always. |
Ah don't you just love how beautiful the ocean is & mostly how captivating, hence the 'jail' in your title, which was so clever! The imagery & descriptions are so perfect, it made me feel like I was in a aquarium or strolling by the ocean. It's all packed so nicely into this little poem, literally captivating the reader which each line. Love this! |
by L
Sorry for this lame comment, |
by Baby Rainbow
This was quite a touching poem actually, I did not expect it to be when I first read it. i erad it again and just felt empathy for these little creaturs in the ocean. It reminds me of the film Happy Feet, when the penguins are behind the glass and they can't get out and Mumble ( the penguin ) feels so trapped and helpless. |