Cancerous Villain (shape)

by Masked metaphor   Mar 18, 2013


Hey everyone,
I tried fixing the shape onto this website but it didnt work but the poem and its skull shaped structure can be viewed through this link...
I would really appreciate comments on this poem as it is my first shaped poem.. Thankyou

http://postimage.org/image/8vjbaqwd1/

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  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Awesome and unbelievable job!
    I love the skull and how you created a poem from it, that takes true talent.
    Truly a masterpiece, it has left me breathless.. It is hard to get the right words for this piece because anything I say wouldn't compare to it's marvel.
    "The villain is inside us all"
    Surely stuck with me because we all have a fault and flaw and I see that as our villain but surely it also reminds me of a snakelike vindictive, poisonous person, an apex predator.
    Maybe even perhaps a illness which is sweeping across the land harming all it comes into contact with, all I know is I associate this poem with harm, hurt, and death but it is SOOOO CREATIVE and SOOOO AMAZINGLY WRITTEN!
    Teach me how to do a poem within an art piece that is so amazing.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Love the shape, it is hard to do on here.

    'the villian is inside us all'

    how true, some of us are better than others at controlling their inner villian.

    nice poem

    (if you were to replace all spaces with either '.' or '-' and then centre it, it should work on here.

    see

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1208416)

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    I LOVE the shape, very creative!I have a little fascination with skull and things of that nature, so this is right up my alley. The shape meshed really well with the topic, and it's nice that we actually got to see the face of the villain. Congrats on the win!

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Wow. This is insanely brilliant.

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh Andrew.. this one touched me on a deep personal level... very heart gripping to the point that I have a touch time commenting on the message... all I can say is.. well done!

    THE SHAPE IS INCREDIBLE!... You truly rocked the skull shape! LOVE IT!