by Maple Tree
Oh Hellon this Haiku is packed with a ton of imagery as well as a strong message. |
by Meme
Oh god this is magnificent!! It took me to another place and another time. Somehow its melancholic but still strong and deep. |
Love the image of the child whose work of art, perhaps even his imaginary Frosty, alive with hat & scarf, was unable to survive the first thaw of spring. |
by Darren
Could this be about a snowman? |
Lovely little haiku. I for one can't wait for the thaw of Spring to begin, this winter is dragging on soo much! However you put a different perspective on this. I just love the word crestfallen, worked so well here! It's unfortunate when all the snowmen melt, as we often see the little child who built it beneath it who is sad to see it disappear. |
by Liz
I thought about a snowman also, then read Darren's comment and I'm not the only one. :P |
by Baby Rainbow
I liked this because you make the readers mind work, and dont just simply say what was in your head in black and white. |