Liar

by Lifesbreath   Mar 19, 2013


You lie to my face
You lie for your case
You lie to your family
You don't do it for the thrill
You do it because you have no will
You lie to live, you lie for others to give
You take because you can
You take and steal from the person you once called your man
You lie because you understand that if you were honest
You would lose more than just your hand

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  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    I like the over all feel of this good job

  • 11 years ago

    by SC Club Account

    "You lie because you understand that if you were honest
    You would lose more than just your hand "

    I could think of many people, who I could attribute these verses to. It was well written, but atleast you know who your true friends are now.

    ~ Mark

  • 11 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Good points about 'lying' and I can feel the bits of emotion. However, this is more like a prose than a poem. Also, try as much as possible to continue with rhymes if you started with rhyming, it's makes your work neat and interesting. I enjoy the gist though. Don't stop writing!