by Lifesbreath Mar 19, 2013
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You lie to my face |
by Biancas Veil
I like the over all feel of this good job |
by SC Club Account
"You lie because you understand that if you were honest |
by Kips2.0
Good points about 'lying' and I can feel the bits of emotion. However, this is more like a prose than a poem. Also, try as much as possible to continue with rhymes if you started with rhyming, it's makes your work neat and interesting. I enjoy the gist though. Don't stop writing! |