Good points about 'lying' and I can feel the bits of emotion. However, this is more like a prose than a poem. Also, try as much as possible to continue with rhymes if you started with rhyming, it's makes your work neat and interesting. I enjoy the gist though. Don't stop writing!

"You lie because you understand that if you were honest
You would lose more than just your hand "

I could think of many people, who I could attribute these verses to. It was well written, but atleast you know who your true friends are now.

~ Mark

I like the over all feel of this good job