by Xanthe Mar 19, 2013
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
When I was thirteen, I made a promise to |
by mistake
I feel like you could be the one singing those lullabies since you seem to have gone now, yet your words linger here. |
by Sam
PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!! |
[Weekly Contest Comment: 3/25/13] |
by Saerelune
"This poem clearly shows that the author has great narrative skills. I am a little bit flabbergasted to spot such typically classic, mythological imagery intertwined with quite modern, every-day imagery ... and it didn't bother me at all, even though it was quite clear. Maybe it's because the language/style remained quite steady throughout the poem. I could easily lose myself into this poem simply because of its interesting language and descriptions, while easily forgiving the fact that it's quite a cryptic write. Maybe because, with these kind of writes, one doesn't necessarily have to feel the meaning, but rather the atmosphere. And I also enjoy it when poets take advantage of structure to set a pace, which was the case at the end of this poem. Interesting write." |
by Wicked Ways
And I only wish I could rest as peacefully |