by Karla
Superb piece favourite Poetess! |
by Max
Simply fascinating, this should be on the front page next Monday |
by Decayed
Beautiful poem, Xanthe :) |
by Darren
Congrats on your win |
This is so dreamlike, but then what isn't? The depth portrayed here, of loss and hope is exquisite. This reminds me of my own dreams and desires. Well done. |
by Lonely Rider
Ohh the language is so beautiful, I felt as if I was flowing along with the flow of the poem - smooth and calm. |
by Texas Battle
You leave me with no words,superB. |
by Hellon
I'm not going to copy/paste the whole poem because it's quite long so..just highlighting part that were interesting to me... |
by Xanthe
Thanks, everyone. |
by Wicked Ways
And I only wish I could rest as peacefully |
by Saerelune
"This poem clearly shows that the author has great narrative skills. I am a little bit flabbergasted to spot such typically classic, mythological imagery intertwined with quite modern, every-day imagery ... and it didn't bother me at all, even though it was quite clear. Maybe it's because the language/style remained quite steady throughout the poem. I could easily lose myself into this poem simply because of its interesting language and descriptions, while easily forgiving the fact that it's quite a cryptic write. Maybe because, with these kind of writes, one doesn't necessarily have to feel the meaning, but rather the atmosphere. And I also enjoy it when poets take advantage of structure to set a pace, which was the case at the end of this poem. Interesting write." |
[Weekly Contest Comment: 3/25/13] |
by Sam
PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!! |
by mistake
I feel like you could be the one singing those lullabies since you seem to have gone now, yet your words linger here. |