I totally agree this poem is very sweet and unique. Your poem make me feel like I am back in the day of the old testament. The times when men wore the long beards and white wigs. This poem is romantic and wrote and a manner where the readers could connect.

Favorite stanzas...

Serenity, the wish of mine soul
Toward thee, and that ample grace
Be bestowed upon thee forever.
This petitioned I for thee every day.

Just beautiful...5/5

Exquisite Kips!!!

Hey Kips! I like your style, in fact I prefer it myself. I love this stanza;

Why shouldst thou toil or famish
While others dine and flourish?
I wouldst trade mine gladness
For every one of thy sorrows.

It shows real love, the way its meant to be,yet so few of us ever realize it, and, therefore miss it completely. Keep up the good work friend.