Magdalen (Englyn milwr)

by Meme   Mar 19, 2013


This journey had started when
I learned how to hold a pen;
with it I drafted my sin.

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Englyn milwr:
The soldier's englyn. This consists of three seven-syllable lines. All three lines rhyme.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ohhhhhhh!!! Meme I just love this form that Andrea introduced the group too! I feel like it takes rhymed and formed poetry to a whole other level, especially when you can pen something as deep as this in a few short lines. Seriously excellent job with this hun!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow Meme, very powerful indeed. Well done for making this work.

    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    You lot and your challenges.......sounds like too much hard work to me.

    Congrats on this Englyn Milwr, very well written.
    love the last line, hints at knowing you are going to sin and have come to terms with it, almost normalised it in your own mind.
    good write,

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks for stopping by to read my piece :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh be still my formed poetry heart......... YES! Meme YES! you really did beautiful with this one... the message is deep... and to the point! Oh this excites me!!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Well I have you to thank for always bringing something new into our poetic lives :) Mwaaah!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love how our little challenges create pieces like this, that was powerful and to any writer, I think it would touch a part of a soul...

    Totally love this Meme!
    x

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      I love those little challenges, they always teach us new poetry concepts and forms :)

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