Comments : Seamless Scheme. [Haiku]

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh wow!! The details in this hailu are just beautiful....Love the use of rainbow prism! And iridescent skies...I mean the first and last line of this poem makes the whole piece a BANG...

    Just breathtaking for being a 3 lined poem. Very nice write!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Well you painted an elegant and beautiful scene in this haiku Natasha!

    Rainbows hovering over and ocean, and so creatively wording the imagery... holds me in awe... thats the beauty of the haiku form... and you mastered it well with this piece!