Ahh, such a horrible feeling to go through, like we are being controlled, abused, unable to stop it..Its unbearable and you can't breathe...I know that feeling a tad bit too well actually, but the best feeling is breaking free of it.

I like the repeated use of entrapment and how you it shows the seriousness of the situation.

Sad write Saffie Taffy :( But always a good one!

This was a tough one to read, but I like that you address such topics. In the line "...in attempt to escape your entrapment." I feel that the attacker's entrapment is more than the relationship. Is there a baby involved? That's awful to have to watch yourself go through something like that; I couldn't imagine... I really enjoyed this, despite the sad subject.

After reading this a couple of times, I take it two different ways or maybe both ways are within this... being trapped in an abusive relationship or feeling trapped inside yourself or it could be a combination... either one can be so terrifying, feelings of not being able to breathe, tightness in your chest, always feeling sick... its not healthy until you can be free of what is trapping you...

This is heartbreaking and you express your fears so well within your words...

SAFF...good job, this reminds me of a local movie where the story tells about the daughter being abuse by her father, somehow the little girl manage to escape with that horrible monster, but the message in here is courage to stand and fight.

SAFF...good job, this reminds me of a local movie where the story tells about the daughter being abuse by her father, somehow the little girl manage to escape with that horrible monster, but the message in here is courage to stand and fight.