Comments : Reflections [Senryu]

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very truly worded, we see the bad things when in reality others see the good things.

    The syllable count is right, but this would class as a senryu and not a haiku since it is not about nature.

    Good job.

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      I'm not familiar with form, but I guess I am now, haha. Thanks :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Truth.

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I like how your short poems have such deep meanings to them as if you wrote a letter length. i think it's true that everyone has at least a little evil in them.

  • 10 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Reflections of ourselves that WE see are really cruel. We see the us which is hidden from the entire world. Reflection of the dark inside us.... They reflect the monsters we truly are.

    Wonderful poem....