Falling Flakes [Tanka/ Waka]

by Rusheena   Mar 20, 2013


Falling flakes caress
my frozen, blue cheeks, stained by
blackened waterfalls.
My crimson eyes fall victim
to fatigue. The flurry wins.

*A tanka and waka are the same thing. Inspired by Baby Rainbow's title challenge*

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    The image I got here was someone actually being trapped in a storm somewhere. The feeling like the coldness is winning and stealing all your warmth and draining your energy. I could imagine their eyes closing and them giving up because it is so cold and tiring to battle through it.

    Very powerful, and fitting to the weather right now!

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