Golden Promise [Haiku]

by Rusheena   Mar 20, 2013


One day, a golden
promise will part the clouds, and
every knee shall bow.

*Inspired by Baby Rainbow's title challenge and "Letters from the Sky" by Civil Twilight*

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  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Simply beautiful more than I expected.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    See this is why I like the idea of people writing the same title, it really interesets me to see what they come up with and it is always something different to what I imagined they would write.

    Very short, clear image and tone of hope and happiness and also faith .

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Nothing much to say about this girl, besides just beautiful...You didnt try to make this too poetic, just more of a statement, and I loved its topic :)

    Nicely Done!

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