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" In the dark nights,
I hear him creep.
He knows not words.
His cuts go deep."

^^ strong dark opening stanza, it has vivid imagery of fear and pain... deep and personal.

"He's what you are,
Not what you think.
His shrill laugh heightens
The deeper you sink."

^^ my favourite stanza... I had the imagery of being kicked whilst your down.

I love dark writes... I stayed away from rhyming poetry for a while but I find myself rekindling a love for it...

Into my favourites,
Well penned :)