Comments : Eternal Sleep

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I'm addicted to your poetry for some reason lately, I suppose because I sympathize with you & all your emotions you're going through. This poem shows someone who has gone through so much and feels like giving up, because they are sick of everything & just want an end. I can feel your struggle here, I feel the weight of your emotions so much here, that at the end of the poem you feel the same way you do. You deserve none of this, and I hope soon it will all be over so you can catch a break. Another raw poem of so much emotion. Love.