Love it!

Short, but has a great message. Nicely done.

grace granted graciously.

^I love that, it's very tongue twister like. Plus all the 'G' words make it a fun read.

Ahhh, I love the use of alliteration! I'm a big fan of it, I sometimes try to use at least 2 or 3 of the same first letter words in a poem somewhere, I think it helps with the flow and sometimes turns it into a fun tongue twister for the reader.

Lovely!