Ohhhh wow - very mysterious. I love the flow of this, the wording is ismple and creates that image of fear and an unknown creature within seconds.

It makes me think what it could be. This is frustrating though as it is like reading the back of a book and then having the book taken away lol! i challlenge you to use this poem idea to create a new poem and reveal this fear and creature???

Very interesting idea, the tone was definitley dark. xx

Oh, Rusheena! This reminds me of a nightmare I had a while back and you gave me chills rushing down my spine. It really brings to mind that one scene from Insidious, a scary movie, where the monster was sharpening his claws. It really creeped me out.

Good job!