Oh my, Chelsey! What a beautiful story you're giving us here! The starter of this piece is inviting, "Do you have time of a story?" I was like, "Sure, why not." And once I get myself to some certain part, there's something ticking inside me, like it makes me just wanna read it till the very last line.

Now there's a few secretive part, if you know what I mean. And I liked that. 'Cause it gives the chills you're having when you're writing, when we're reading this piece. I don't know about others, but sure it gives me, lots! Even by telling a bit of the facts about this person is more than enough.

And I sense "happiness" in here, wow, it shows just how many affection that is received there between you too. It's cute!

Sure, you brought us up until the very last line, and that's good. And having someone that you can rely on, like you're saying in this piece, ALWAYS giving you the urge, the inspiration to write is a great way to produce more intriguing writing in the future.

And I must say I am so in love with the last part. What a lovely ending! You leave me hanging there, like, "Oh, I'm curious what is happening between these two.. Must be something interesting!" but I'll leave to that. Your words really is amazing. I wish you both all the best in everything, hoping to read more from you. And,

GOOD LUCK!!!

OH MY QUACKING DUCKS!!! (Random I know)

This was blooming marvellous,
I was so caught in the descriptions, the way you drew me in with your words, pulling me towards the next line, and I was reading this fast and then thought, hang on, let me start again and some of those descriptions were like totally amazing.

You always have the ability to make me go "WTF" with the imagery, and the emotion wasn't overly strong but I could see that this person gets you in all the wrong places but all the right ones as well, you just penned something that I think is the best piece of poetry I have read ever!!!

Your muse can be good for you, I feel that is what you are relaying here, but the way he digs into you, is heartbreaking to feel and that came across really well.

You are some kind of alien when you write, you're too good to be human, Chels...LOL

LOVED IT!!

This is the first time I felt no emotion from one of your pieces , I didn't like that lol

However I'm a sucker for uniques and this is soooo
Unique .

You really surprise me everytime , amazing chelly

You carry us through the poem by the power of intrigue, as if we are woven in a spider web. Quite lovly.