by La Reina De Corazones Mar 21, 2013
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Skin so dirty, yet so clean, |
Wonderfully Dome!!! |
by DarkLight
Simple but sweet |
by FallenSkyler
Wow this is incredible.. u sent shivers down our spines |
by Rusheena
I really like that I couldn't figure where the story was going. Nice twist at the end. The speaker seemed like a victim at first but turned out to be a femme fetale. Love it! One suggestion, in the second line of the second stanza, "lay" should be "lie", since it is a person and not an object. Nice work. |
Very beautiful, I liked it quite a bit... An interesting spin on last loves |