Oh my god this is freaking adorable! Aside from that, i feel this poem really applies the nervous flutter of a first crush/love. No matter how old, all these feelings you have weaved into this apply :) nice job 5/5

Awww! This is so cute! It's so fresh and innocent, brings back so many memories... Nice work!

Very Nice Ash.

Nicely expressed and good rhymes

I like this one indeed!

Aaw! finally I was someone's hun, i love it

A sweet love poem for someone that don`t really like love poems