You never really fail to make me smile with your poetry, although it's usually quite serious matter you're writing about. I guess it's truly in your tone, such excitement and jolliness, ruffling the feathers of society. Of course it also helps that your works read so smoothly (moreso in the second half of this poem, though, the first seems to have some sort of "insecure" flow?). Must say you have a unique mind too, to mark something as big as the earth as "out of order", ha. Keep up the jolly criticism, I would say. :) You're great at it.